Friday, April 1, 2016

Haiku



Gray wind noisy.
Frozen leaves nearly red.
Makes the creek grin.


1 comment:

  1. Dear Cody,

    Your poem was mind blowing.
    I thought your poem was very flowing.
    Your poem had some great pics.
    Your poem was also very slick.

    I think you need to have more great words.
    And something that has the chirping birds.
    Your poem needs a little work.
    But I'm not trying to be jerk.

    -Chris Martinez

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